Friday 6 November 2015

Film Language Test Learner Response 

WWW: in each question you pick out some key details that could help answer the question however...

EBI: ...your answers are overwhelmingly description rather than analysis. You don't discuss the potential meaning in any depth- you need this for the high levels.
- no jump cuts; you need to revise editing.
-need paragraphing... this will also help you add depth and stay focused on the question.

LR:

Majority of the scene is continuity editing and all the shots followed in a chronological order. This helps create tension as we suspect that the scene is building up to a significant event. Additionally, the use of the slow paced editing also creates drama and tension in the opening scene, since it makes everything to happen slower and the audience almost acknowledge everything happening in more detail. However, the pace only gets slower once the second character arrives, before this the pace is rather fast as the scene straight cuts from the match being lit to the fire starting and then to second character. 

Futhermore, when the second character arrives, slow motion is used when he is walking down the stairs which creates even more suspense and tension because we as the audience assume that the arrival of this character could led to violence or death. In addition to that, the characters face not being shown emphasises the pressure the audience is feeling by he arrival of this particular character. the lack of editing here also creates a tense atmosphere.

Lastly, once the man is shot there are straight cuts to severa different things and we are not aware whether the man is dead or whether the second character got shot instead which leaves the audience stressed. 

Preliminary Excersise- Planning 

Location: School D Block
Sequence of events:

  • Girl walking up the stairs 
  • Girl opening door 
  • Girl going through the door 
  • Girl going into classroom
  • Girl sitting down opposite another girl 
  • Other girl starts talking 
  • Conversation between two girls 
  • Girl stands up and walks away 
Actresses: TBC 

Script: 

Girl walks up the stairs and opens the door. She enters the classroom 
and sits opposite her friend

Girl 1: I was expecting to see you here
Girl 2: Were you now? 
Girl 1: I need to talk to you
Girl 2: Go on I'm listening (fiddling with nails)
Girl 1: I saw you the other day with Sandra. So I never knew you liked that girl, when did you become friends ey?
Girl 2: I swear it's not like that. It's not what it seems
Girl 1: K (rolls eyes and gets up and walks away)

Shot List: 

  • Close up of feet walking up the stairs 
  • Medium shot of her walking 
  • Medium shot of her back 
  • Medium shot opening the door 
  • Close up of her hand as she opens the door (match on action)
  • Long shot of her walking through the door 
  • Medium shot of her back 
  • POV shot of her looking at her friend in the classroom 
  • Medium shot of her about to sit down 
  • Close up of her hand pulling out the chair 
  • Medium shot of the two 
  • Over the shoulder shot over girl 2
  • OTS over girl 1 
  • Medium shot of them both exchanging 2 lines of dialogue 
  • OTS of girl 2 
  • OTS of girl 1
  • Low angle shot of girl getting up and walking away